donated.html page needs rewording (web)

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19 Sep, 2012 11:20 PM

The grammar used in the 2nd paragraph on seems awkward:

"As a token of appreciation we would like to publish your name (or company) at our list of sponsors. Please let us know in case you accept this offer."

I suggest this be re-worked as follows:

"As a token of our appreciation we'd like to publish your name (or company) in our list of sponsors. But to protect your privacy we won't include you without your explicit consent. Please select public or anonymous below."

       ( ) public (*) anonymous

  1. Support Staff 1 Posted by Luke Le on 19 Sep, 2012 11:27 PM

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    Most of our copy will be completely updated soon.
    Thanks for the input.

  2. Luke Le closed this discussion on 09 Oct, 2012 09:26 PM.

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